Lounging In Bed

I like big girl's shape and how you posed her, pretty artistic, but what is made this shot breathtaking it's her skin texture, concave, vault of her back and ofcourse that sheet barely covering her goods. Actually skin tone nice on both girls and very soft lighting with a bit of  shine on her back  is nice touch. Also great details of props and deformation. By the way I don't like their faces and hair, not my cup of tea. Would like to see improved version of this. I like ponytails. As for make up I think this one fits more into the compostion, looks pretty empty, calm and speechless.